评论
打印
Next, let's look at your coherence and cohesion score.
接下来，我们看看写作统一性的评分标准。
I'm going to refer to coherence and cohesion as C＆C, to keep things simple.
为了避免重复提到“写作统一性”，下文中我们将其简称为“C&C”。
Here are the habits which can limit your C＆C score to six: “I need to use more linking words to get a higher score."
如果有以下一些习惯，你的C&C得分可能会限制在6分:“我要使用更多的连词来获得更高的分数。”
“My essay should have an introduction, two body paragraphs and a conclusion." Let's look at each point separately.
我的文章应该有一个引言，两个主体段落和一个结论。我们来单独分析每一个要点。
Oh, hey, Oli! How was your IELTS exam? Amazing! I totally nailed it.
嘿,奥利！你的雅思考试怎么样？惊呆了！我居然搞定了。
I used nevertheless, furthermore, however, in spite of the fact that, AND in addition.
我用了however, further, however, in spite of the fact, 还有in addition这些连词。
My band 7 score is GUARANTEED! No, it doesn't work like that.
我肯定能拿到7分!不，事实不是那样的。
First of all, linking isn't just about linking words.
首先，连接不仅仅是指连接单词。
It's about the logic and flow of your ideas.
而是关于思维的逻辑性和流畅度。
Look at a sentence: Air pollution is a serious problem.
看这个句子:空气污染是一个严重的问题。
However, food prices are higher than ten years ago.
然而，食品价格比十年前要高。
Using however here doesn't magically make these ideas connected.
使用“however”并不能将这些句子“神奇地”联系起来。
These two ideas aren't connected, and you can't create a connection by using a word like however.
这两个句子之间没有联系，你不能用“然而”这样的词来建立联系。
Next, there's nothing in the IELTS scoring system which says you get a higher score for using more linking words.
接下来，雅思考试评分系统中没有说使用连接词越多，得分就越高。
It's more important to make sure you use linking words accurately.
更重要的是要确保使用连接词的准确性。
Using more linking words won't get you band seven.
使用大量的连词并不能让你得到7分。
However, using linking words incorrectly will get you band six.
但是，使用连词不当肯定会让你拿6分。
So, don't use linking words just to use linking words.
所以，不要为了连接句子而使用连接词。
Use them because they fit your ideas.
在符合你的思路的情况下再使用。
Don't think, “I have to use nonetheless to get a high score!" You don't.
不要这么想，“我必须用连词才能得高分！”不是这样的。
Next, let's look at our second point: paragraphing.
接下来，我们来看第二点：分段。
Many IELTS candidates use the same structure for everything they write.
许多雅思考生在写作时都会使用相似的结构。
For example, for task two, most people write an introduction, two body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
例如，对于任务二，大多数人会写一个引言、两个主体段落和一个结论。
That might be fine.
这一点没有问题。
However, to get band 7 for C&C, you need to “present a clear central topic within each paragraph." Those aren't my words.
然而，要想拿到7分，你需要“在每个段落中呈现一个清晰的中心主题”。这可不是我随便说的。
That's straight from the IELTS scoring scheme.
这是直接从雅思评分体系中得出来的。
Many students, especially in task two, write paragraphs like this:
很多学生，尤其是在任务二中，会这样写:
There are many advantages to … Firstly, … Secondly, … Thirdly, … This kind of writing is likely to get a score of 6 for C&C.
使用“首先，……其次，……第三，”……这种写作手法很可能在C&C中得6分。
Why? Because, if you do this, you're trying to put too much in one paragraph.
为什么？因为，如果你这么写，只能在一段内容里陈述太多内容。
That means your paragraph won't have a clear central topic.
这意味着你的段落中没有一个清晰的中心主题。
So, what's the solution? First, plan your essay carefully.
那么，解决办法是什么呢？首先，仔细规划文章布局。
Make sure you know exactly what you're putting in each paragraph before you start writing.
在开始写作之前，确保你确切地知道要在每个段落中阐述的内容。
Secondly, make sure your paragraph starts with a clear topic sentence.
第二，确保每个段落都以一个清晰的主题句开头。
Your topic sentence should be relatively short and simple.
主题句应该相对简短、扼要。
If your topic sentence is very long and complicated, then your topic probably isn't clear.
如果主题句又长又复杂，那么你的主题思想可能会表述不清。
Then, after your topic sentence, spend the rest of the paragraph developing and extending your main idea.
然后，在主题句之后，用剩下的时间来阐述和扩充你的中心思想。
This means that you aren't adding any new ideas or changing the topic in the middle of your paragraph.
这意味着不能在段落中间添加任何新的观点或更改主题。
Also, this means you might need different numbers of paragraphs depending on how many main ideas you have.
还有，这意味着你可能需要好几个段落，这取决于主要思想的数量。
Do you have two body paragraphs in your essay? That means you have two main ideas.
你的文章只有两个主体段落？这意味着你要有两个主要观点。
Do you have three main ideas? Then you need three paragraphs! Another point: paragraphs don't have a minimum length.
你有三个主要观点？然后你需要写三个段落！还有一点：段落没有最小长度限制。
There's no such thing as a paragraph which is too short.
段落再短也可以自成一段。
Paragraphs can be any length. So, let's review this section.
段落长度可以自由发挥。我们来回顾一下这一节内容。
To get band seven C＆C in your IELTS writing exam, you need to focus on using linking words accurately and appropriately.
要在雅思写作考试中的C＆C部分拿到7分，你需要注意正确恰当地使用连词。
You also need to make sure every paragraph has a clear central topic,
还需要确保每个段落都有一个清晰的中心主题，
which means you shouldn't try to put many different ideas in one paragraph.
这意味着最好不要在一个段落中表达许多不同的观点。
Next, let's look at vocabulary and how you can get to band seven.
接下来，我们来看看词汇以及如何拿到7分。
Here's a band six idea that students often have: “I need to learn lots of synonyms and uncommon vocabulary.
下面是考6分的学生经常存在的思维模式:“我需要学习很多同义词和不常见的词汇。
If my vocabulary is bigger, I'll get a higher score." There's one important difference between band six and seven for vocabulary.
如果我的词汇量大一些，我就能拿高分。”在词汇方面，6分和7分的评分标准有一个重要的区别。
At band six, you need two things: range and clarity.
针对6分成绩，你需要做两件事：范围和清晰度。
That means, if you at least try to use some more advanced or uncommon vocabulary, you can get six
就是说，如果至少尝试使用一些更高级或不常见的词汇，你可以得到6分，
if your meaning is clear, even if you make mistakes, even if you make lots of mistakes.
如果你的表述清晰，即使犯错了，或者说犯了很多错误也没关系。
