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However, for band seven, you need three things: range, clarity and accuracy.
然而，对于7分的成绩来说，你需要注意三个要点：范围、清晰度和准确性。
It's no longer enough just to try.
不是说抱着侥幸心理就可以。
You need to use vocabulary “with flexibility and precision"—again, this is a quote from the official scoring scheme.
你需要使用“灵活和精确”的词汇——同样，这里引用的是官方评分体系的标准。
You can't make many mistakes for band seven.
想要拿到7分，一定不能出现太多失误。
You can produce ‘occasional errors' and still get band seven.
“偶尔出现失误”，也许也能得到7分。
What does this mean for you? It means that your priority should be avoiding mistakes.
这意味着什么？意味着首要任务应该是避免出错。
I see many IELTS students trying to learn lots of idioms, phrases, academic vocabulary and so on.
我看到许多参加雅思考试的学生在努力学习大量的习语、短语、学术词汇等等。
But then, they often don't know how to use this vocabulary well.
但是，他们通常不知道如何灵活地使用这些词汇。
They use it in their writing, because they think it sounds nice, and their meaning might be clear, but it's not correct.
学生们在写作中使用的原因，可能是觉得这些词听起来高大上，词的含义可能很贴近，但是不准确。
That's fine for band six, but not for band seven.
这对6分考试来说也许可行，但对7分考试来说行不通。
So, what should you do? Look, first of all, vocabulary learning is hard work and it's slow.
那么，你应该怎么做呢？首先，词汇学习是一项艰苦的任务，需要日积月累。
There aren't any magic solutions here.
这一点没有什么“一步到位”的解决办法。
But I'll give you one tip: When you're learning vocabulary, focus on quality and depth, not quantity.
我要给大家一个建议：学习词汇时，要注重词汇的质量和深度，而不是数量。
Don't try to learn 50 words or phrases.
不要想着学50个单词或短语。
Learn five words or phrases, but really learn them.
先学习五个单词或短语，并且真正地掌握它们。
Spend an hour learning and practising five new words and phrases.
花一个小时学习和练习五个新单词和短语。
Find example sentences. Write your own example sentences.
找一下例句。自己试着写一写例句。
Ask a teacher or whoever you can find to give you feedback.
向老师或任何能提供帮助的人寻求反馈。
Make sure you know how to use your new vocabulary correctly.
确保知道如何正确使用新词汇。
Another point: in the exam, if you have a choice between a simple word which you know is correct,
还有一点：在考试中，如果遇到这种情况：选择一个知道正确的简单词汇
and a more advanced or academic word which you aren't sure about, what should you do? Use the simple word.
还是选择一个拿不准的更高级或学术性的词汇，你会怎么办？选简单的词汇。
Only use vocabulary you're sure you understand and that you know how to use.
一定要使用你确定自己理解和知道如何使用的词汇。
This is the opposite to band six.
这一点和6分的标准是相反的。
For band six, you can use the more advanced word, even if it's wrong.
针对6分成绩的考试，你可以使用更高级的词汇，即使出错也无妨。
But remember, to get band seven, you need to be accurate.
不过切记，7分的考试更看重的是准确性。
You can't make many mistakes.
一定不能犯很多错误。
So, in this situation, take the safe choice!
所以，在这种情况下，选择保险一点的词汇！
Finally, let's look at the grammar score and how you can get to band seven.
最后，我们看看语法成绩，以及如何才能拿到7分。
Here's the band six idea which students often have: “Grammar's not so important, so long as people can understand what I mean."
这是学生们经常持有的六级观点:“语法不是很重要，只要人们能理解我的意思就行。”
Again, band six and band seven are very different.
再强调一下，6分和7分的区别是很大的。
This is especially true for your grammar score.
对于语法分数来说尤其如此。
What's the difference? Like vocabulary, you need to be accurate to get band seven.
区别是什么呢？比如说词汇，你需要精确到7分。
At band six, it doesn't really matter how many grammar mistakes you make so long as your meaning is clear.
想要获得6分成绩，出现多少语法错误并不重要，只要意思表达清楚即可。
At band seven, the quantity of grammar errors you make matters.
而要获得7分成绩，语法错误的数量至关重要。
It really matters! To get band seven for grammar, you need to “produce frequent error-free sentences"
这一点真的很重要！要想在语法中拿到7分，你需要“写出频繁无误的句子”
Again, these words are directly from the official IELTS scoring scheme.
同样，这些词都是直接来自雅思官方评分体系的。
That means if you make a lot of small mistakes, it's almost impossible to get band seven for grammar.
也就是说如果你犯了很多小错误，语法这一块几乎不可能拿到7分。
All mistakes count: you use the wrong preposition? It's a mistake.
所有的错误都会计入评分：用错了介词？这也算错误。
You forget to use the? Mistake.
忘记使用定冠词"the"？扣分。
You forget the ‘s' on a present simple verb? Mistake.
忘了一般现在时动词加“s”？扣分。
If your writing is around band six, you probably make more mistakes than you realise.
如果你的写作成绩在6分徘徊，那么犯的错误可能会超过你的想象。
So, again, what can you do? First, you need to identify the common mistakes which you make.
那么，你该怎么做呢？首先，你需要确定易犯的错误。
For this, you need a teacher to show you where you make mistakes in your writing.
关于这一点，你需要老师指出写作中的错误点。
Every time you do some writing, look at the grammar mistakes you make.
每次写作的时候，看看你所犯的语法错误。
Sort them into two categories.
把错误分成两类。
One: mistakes with things you don't know.
第一类：在不了解的部分出错。
Two: mistakes with things you already knew.
第二类：在熟悉的部分出错。
For example, if you write ‘childrens' instead of ‘children', this is probably a type two mistake.
例如，如果你把children写成了childrens，这可能要归入第二类错误。
Most likely, you knew this already.
很可能，你已经知道了怎么划分。
You just made a mistake, because you were in a hurry, or you were tired, or you have a bad habit,
你可能会因为太着急，太累，或养成了不良的习惯，
or you weren't paying attention, or something like that.
又或者没有注意到，总之种种原因，都会导致你出错。
With type one mistakes—things you don't know—get a good grammar book and study to fill the gaps in your knowledge.
第一类错误——你不理解的事情——找一本好的语法书来学习，弥补知识上的短板。
With type two mistakes, put your errors into a digital flashcard app like Anki or Quizlet or something like that.
如果是第二种类型的错误，把错误输入一个数字抽认卡应用程序，比如Anki或Quizlet或类似的程序。
For example: Question: This is one of most serious problems in today's world.
例如：问题：这是当今世界最严重的问题之一。
Answer: This is one of the most serious problems in today's world.
答：这是当今世界最严重的问题之一。
Every time you write something, add your mistakes as questions to your flashcard app.
每次写文章的时候，把易错点作为问题添加到抽认卡应用程序中。
Review your mistakes regularly—every day is best!
定期回顾容易犯的错误——最好每天都复习!
This approach requires a lot of patience,
这种方法需要极大的耐心，
but it's the only effective way to get rid of those bad habits which can stop you getting band seven in IELTS writing.
但却是唯一有效的方法，能够让大家改掉无法在雅思写作中拿到7分的坏习惯。
Okay, so now you should have some ideas about how to get band seven in your IELTS writing exam.
好了，现在大家应该对如何在雅思写作考试中拿到7分理清一些思路了。
There's a lot of information in this lesson, and there's also a lot which I didn't say!
这节课包含了很多信息，还有很多我没有提到的知识点!
Band seven is a high standard, and you should accept that it will take time and work to get there.
7分的成绩是一个高标准，你要知道，这需要时间和努力才能实现。
Do you have an IELTS experience which you think people could learn from? Please let us know in the comments!
你有什么值得借鉴的雅思考试经验给大家分享吗？请在评论中留言！
Check out our website for more free English lessons, including IELTS preparation lessons: Oxford Online English dot com.
请登录我们的网站获取更多免费英语课程，包括雅思备考课程：牛津在线英语网站。
Our teachers can also help you prepare for your IELTS exam in online classes.
我们的老师也可以在线帮助大家准备雅思考试。
That's all for this lesson. Thanks for watching, and see you next time!
以上就是今天课程的全部内容。感谢收看，咱们下期见！
