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31. Some people spend their entire lives in oneplace. Others move a number of times throughout their lives, looking for abetter job, house, community, or even climate. Which do you prefer: staying inone place or moving in search of another place? Use reasons and specificexamples to support your opinion.
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Topic 31 Stay at one placeor move around?
Staying in one place or moving in search of anotherplace? Some people prefer to living in one place because they enjoy aharmonious relation with their neighbors and environments. While others preferto moving from one place to another because of various reasons, a better job, house,community, or even climate. Looking back to my education and looking forward tomy future career, I have been and will be moving a number of times. But consideringmy personality, I would rather live in one place when I am old.
For a student, a good education opportunity is the most importantconcern. Students leave their homes for good university education. Differentschools have different teaching styles. It is very common for students tochoose among different schools to find a most suitable one. I did pursue mybachelor's degree far from my hometown, and I am pursuing my master degree atanother university, and would like to pursue a ph. D abroad.
Career development is another important issue. In order tohave a strong experience and to get a fulfilling job, people would work in anumber of companies. In different companies, we could experience differentcultures and ways of doing things. The variety of people and culture will domuch good to our future career development.
However, frankly speaking, I am not an aggressive person.I would rather enjoy my live in a stable pace. When I am old and without thepressure to struggle for a better job, I would prepare to stay in a peacefuland quiet place, where I could chat with my old friends everyday.
Taking into account all these factors, I would like to presentmyself such a solution: To try a number of places for better education and jobopportunities when I am young; to stay in a peaceful place to enjoy live withmy wife when I am old.
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