Morning~AmyLee要认真规划好备考的每一天，你呢！非常感谢大家的陪伴，我们YY可可备考小组的成员越来越多了，不许偷懒，托福优秀范文一天写一篇学一篇哦，写好了可以发送至我邮箱keke3096@qq.com进行互批，共同进步!^^

我已经托福三战过了，对考试各方面都很熟悉，所以大家到考前了有什么疑惑也可以发邮件给我，我会尽力为大家解答。

每天的写作任务是这样的，写好每天的作文发至我的邮箱（如果你想加入作文批改小组请注明），我们将进入互批作文模式。

在此我对每天的topic进行解析和范文精讲，请大家写完作文之后不忘进行比较，找出自己的不足之处。开始吧！

30. It has recently been announced that a new highschool may be built in your community. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why?Use specific reasons and details in your answer.

Topic 30Ahigh school in the community

I support the plan of building a new high school in my community,as currently there are no high schools in my community and the nearest one isalmost three miles away from the community.

Students in my community have to travel a long distance eitherby any available conveyance or independent transportation. As all of themcannot afford to have their own transport and the parents are also finding itdifficult to drop their children daily at the school that is far away fromtheir work places. As the high school is far away and many children have totake either auto rickshaws or buses, there is a traffic problem caused in theroute during the school days. There are also potential dangers as the autorickshaws tend to transport more children than it can carry, therefore there isa risk of accidents causing by these overcrowded autos.

Also the land that was allocated for high schoolconstruction is being encroached by private people. Our community mostlyconsists of middle class people, and they cannot afford to send their childrenon school buses and there is a lot of time being wasted on transportation to theschool. Our community consists of other facilities like a university and ahospital, but lacks a high school. It would also be comfortable for smallchildren to go to the school if it is made in our community and the parents wouldnot worry about dropping off their child at school.

Finally the high school that is going to be built in the communitycan also provide employment opportunities to college graduates who areunemployed in the community and ready to take up the teaching profession. In sum,I support that a new high school should be built in my community.

好了，今天就说这么多，大家一定要坚持练习作文，每天进步一小点，一个月下来托福写作绝对是质的提升！希望大家跟着我每天一篇练下去，写作都是硬功夫，跟小时候每周都要写语文作文是一样的，功夫到家自然成，加油！

最后再mention一下互评作文的事情，这个作文互评目前只有我在做，我希望尽可能给有需要的可可粉们提供帮助，如果你们中有愿意跟我一起批改大家作文的，一定要mail我加入哦！（互批可以进步非常快，做过才知道！）

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