ATTENTION PLEASE！这周有一个小调整，我们周二周三休息，双休日照常学习，仅这周哦！谢谢大家配合~AmyLee非常感谢大家的陪伴，我们YY可可备考小组的成员越来越多了，不许偷懒，托福优秀范文一天写一篇学一篇哦，写好了可以发送至我邮箱keke3096@qq.com进行互批，共同进步!^^

我已经托福三战过了，对考试各方面都很熟悉，所以大家到考前了有什么疑惑也可以发邮件给我，我会尽力为大家解答。

每天的写作任务是这样的，写好每天的作文发至我的邮箱（如果你想加入作文批改小组请注明），我们将进入互批作文模式。

在此我对每天的topic进行解析和范文精讲，请大家写完作文之后不忘进行比较，找出自己的不足之处。开始吧！

7. How do movies or television influence people's behavior? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.

Topic 7 How do movies or TV affect people?

Movies are popular because people are great watchers. They like to watch other peoples' lives. They like to live vicariously（间接感受到地）. By going to movies, we can escape our own lives, share other people's emotions, and imagine ourselves as someone else.

Many of our lives are not as adventurous or glamorous（迷人的）as the lives in movies. We do not battle evil（不幸的）all day long and then go back to our luxurious penthouse apartment（奢华的屋顶公寓）. We just go to school, do our homework, eat, talk to our friends, and sleep. We need a little excitement in our lives and we find excitement at the movies.（在平凡的生活中寻找点刺激，这确实是看电影的目的之一）

Humans are very emotional people. We all like to cry and laugh. Fortunately, there is not much to cry about in my life so I like to go to sad movies where my heartstrings can be tugged（扣人心弦）. I also like to go to comedies so that I can laugh. I tend to cry and laugh more in a dark movie theater than I do in broad daylight（光天化日，公开的）.（作者又谈到一个非常有理有据的理由，看电影的时候可以释放自己的情感，不会被人看到，这也是电影的好处之一）

Now I am a student, but I know someday I will be a scientist or a politician or a famous model. When I go to the movies, I can see my role models（楷模）. I see how they act, what they wear, how they talk. I can prepare myself for the day when I will be like them.（作者的这个想法很新颖，他说如果电影中塑造的某一职业的人物形象和谈吐很值得学习的话，他作为某个职业的人也会向这方面靠近和发展）

Even though my life is quiet, I can go to the movies and watch someone else's life. I can share their emotions and their everyday life. I wonder if they would like to share mine.（他把电影和生活紧密地联系在了一起，我们需要电影来丰富我们的生活，释放我们的情感，把好的方面作为学习的典范，这三个理由都强有力地说明了电影对人的影响）

好了，今天就说这么多，大家一定要坚持练习作文，每天进步一小点，一个月下来托福写作绝对是质的提升！希望大家跟着我每天一篇练下去，写作都是硬功夫，跟小时候每周都要写语文作文是一样的，功夫到家自然成，加油！

最后再mention一下互评作文的事情，这个作文互评目前只有我在做，我希望尽可能给有需要的可可粉们提供帮助，如果你们中有愿意跟我一起批改大家作文的，一定要mail我加入哦！（互批可以进步非常快，做过才知道！）

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