PROOFREADING & ERROR CORRECTION
1)illustrated,承接has shown and illustrated...
版本二:the改为a
(2) the little listener改为a little listener,因为是不确指
版本二:when改为until
(3)their改为his以于上文匹配
(4)something 改为somewhere,前者少指时间之长短
版本二:something改为anything
(5)therefore显然应为however
(6) in the general去掉the
(7) currently 改为current
(8) it has passed along 改为 it has been passed
版本二:over and over 后面加again
(9) live 改为 alive
(10) to let alone去掉to 改为 let alone