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四级写作这次还是出得没什么新意,还是结合生活的细节事情来命题,考“过度包装”。其实徐可风认为这也怪不了命题的兄弟,毕竟四六级的命题也就是那些套路了,用多了,自然就很难再创新了。“过度包装”这种现象可风倒是常常看到,例如朋友中秋送的月饼啊,那月饼盒包装得比无比奢华,比骨灰盒还奢华。
命题还是按照“描述现象”、“分析原因”、“建议措施”这老掉牙的三板斧,尽管老套,那也是“斧斧”生辉。(突然看到韩国再次扣押我国渔船的新闻,先鄙视一下)考前的YY里已经把最有效的方式给了大家,就照写吧。昨天微博再次针对具体写作的思路内容给出了建议,不负众望,也有部分内容命中。
下面徐可风就结合考前YY给出的模式,加上考前徐可风微博的预测内容,按照四级阅卷要求,写一份符合四级阅卷要求的的考场参考文章,以供参考。关注文都关注徐可风的童鞋,在看这篇文章时,相信你会有似曾相似的感觉的。
On Excessive Packaging

Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over excessive packaging in our country.
It is known to all that excessive packaging has negative influences on consumers.
And people would turn pale at the very mention of excessive packaging.


There are many reasons why excessive packaging emerges, but in general, they come down to three major ones.
For one thing, I argue, Chinese consumers care more about packaging than product itself.
For another, the packaging often represents the quality of product, so the manufacturer is eager to do excessive packaging.
But the prime reason is perhaps that the department concerned turns a blind eye to this irrational phenomenon.


In regard to this problem, steps should be taken to minimize it.
The first thing we should do is to emphasize product's quality over its packaging.
Another thing we can do is to strengthen the supervision on excessive packaging.
In addition, the Weibo is one of the most effective media that remind consumers to spend reasonably.

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prime [praim]

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adj. 最初的,首要的,最好的,典型的
n.

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quality ['kwɔliti]

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n. 品质,特质,才能
adj. 高品质的

 
strengthen ['streŋθən]

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v. 加强,变坚固

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widespread ['waidspred]

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adj. 分布(或散布)广的,普遍的

 
irrational [i'ræʃənəl]

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n. 无理数 adj. 无理性的,不合理的

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emphasize ['emfəsaiz]

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vt. 强调,着重

 
effective [i'fektiv]

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adj. 有效的,有影响的

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excessive [ik'sesiv]

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adj. 过多的,过分的

 
negative ['negətiv]

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adj. 否定的,负的,消极的
n. 底片,负

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phenomenon [fi'nɔminən]

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n. 现象,迹象,(稀有)事件

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