2015年3月14日雅思写作解析及语料库
　　教育类：(新题出现)
　　Some working parents believe childcare centers can provide best care for their children, others believe that family members like grandparents can do a better job. Discuss both sides and give your opinion?
　　两种观点讨论布局图：
　　首段：背景介绍 + 争议焦点 + 作家立场
　　二段：正方观点的展开：一定要有对于细节的展开或例证的支持
　　三段：反方观点的展开：一定要有对于细节的展开或例证的支持
　　尾段：再次亮明观点+总结理由
　　原创雅思写作语料库：
　　1. strengthen the family tie v增强家庭纽带
　　2. daycare centers = childcare center n幼儿中心
　　3. early childhood education institutions n儿童早教学校
　　4. mental growth, good charter-training and the cultivation of group experience brought about by attending nursery school 由上托儿所带来的精神成长，性格训练以及群体性经验的培养。
　　5. learn to communicate and associate with their peers v学习和同龄人交流交往
　　原创范文赏析：
　　首段：背景介绍 + 争议焦点+ 作家立场
　　Children’s growth education is a great concern for a great many parents, however, not every parent have enough energy to look after their kids，so, people often fall into a dilemma when facing with the question of sending their children to childcare centers and asking their relatives to take care of them. Personally speaking, encouraging children to grow up under the care of grandparents is a superior choice although childcare center can sometimes has an auxiliary role to play.
　　解析：look after sb = take care of sb = see to sb = attend to sb v照顾某人
　　解析：people often fall into a dilemma when facing with the question of A and B 人们在面对……的时候，常常陷入两难的选择
　　解析：under the care of sb 在……的关照下
　　解析：is a superior choice v 是一个更好的选择
　　解析：has an auxiliary role to play v可以发挥辅助性的作用
　　点评：首段个性开篇;主题明确;文风朴素。
　　二段：谈及我方观点的合理性：(我的口吻)
　　The striking advantage of inspiring grandparents to see to their beloved children is that those kids who are in the formative years can receive custom-tailored education，due to the connection of blood tie，grandparents，in most cases，will show more enthusiasm for their children and provide intensive care. In other words, grandparents usually interact with children ceaselessly , smile at children a lot and work hard to communicate with them. However, some toddlers might be spoiled if they are solely educated by their grandparents and thus lead a undisciplined life.
　　解析：beloved children n心爱的孩子
　　解析：toddlers n初学走路的孩子
　　解析：children = those kids who are in the formative years n孩子们
　　解析：receive custom-tailored education = receive custom-made education v接受量体裁衣的教育
　　拓展：Spare the rod and spoil the children 孩子不打不成器
　　拓展：Blood is thicker than water 血浓于水
　　点评：二段讨论祖父母教育孩子的利弊。
　　三段：谈及对立观点合理性(我的口吻)
　　I have to concede that daycare center still enjoys some merits in helping kids grow up smoothly and healthily. More precisely, pre-school childcare centers are usually well-quipped with recreational facilities and professionally well-trained caregivers can foster the child's intellectual, language, social skills. Meanwhile, kids can acquire precious group experience and feel more childhood joy deriving from peers. Nonetheless, as for childcare center, teachers are, sometimes, too busy to provide each child with patient guidance and desirable care.
　　解析：daycare center = childcare center n育儿中心
　　解析：help kids grow up smoothly and healthily v帮助孩子们顺利地健康地成长
　　解析：patient guidance and desirable care n耐心的指导和令人满意的关怀
　　解析：feel more childhood joy deriving from peers v感受同理人带来的乐趣
　　解析：are usually well-quipped with recreational facilities v配备有精良的娱乐设施
　　点评：谈及儿童去早教中心的利弊。
　　尾段：再次亮明观点 + 总结理由
　　In closing, my stand is that both grandparents and childcare centers have indispensable role to play in cultivating a healthy, happy and confident child. The best strategy is to let grandparent assume the responsibilities of taking care of children until the age of three, however, grandparents can send their kids to daycare centers to interact with other peers during the daytime or over weekends, some well-equipped swimming pool for children can serve as a good example
　　解析：both A and B have indispensable role to play in …… 两者在……中都可发挥不可缺少的作用
　　解析：The best strategy is that 最好的策略就是 ……
　　解析：assume the responsibilities v承担责任
　　解析：well-equipped swimming pool for children n设施齐备的儿童游泳馆
　　解析：…… can serve as a good example ……就是很好的例证
　　点评：尾段明确呼应首段观点，强调孩子最好在三岁前由祖父母来带，但是，可以在白天或者周末的时候去儿童游泳馆玩耍，这样孩子成长就可以得到来自亲人和育儿中心的双方的利好。