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下面是2013年2月2日雅思写作真题点评，供考生们参考，以下是详细内容。
2013年2月2日雅思写作真题点评
| 题目 | What are the positive and negative effects of watching TV on children? 孩子们看电视的优缺点。 |
| 开头段 【背景句】 | As children have less time and opportunities to participate in outdoor activities, the influence of sedentary activities, such as watching television, has always been brought into the spotlight. |
| 中间段1 | 优点：
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| 中间段2 | 缺点：
【论证示范】 The reasons are twofold. For one thing, if children spend an inordinate amount of time on watching TV, they will have less time for sports. For another thing, children tend to consume large quantities of junk food while watching TV.As a result, their physical health will be undermined.
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| 结尾段 | In conclusion, though television watching can contribute to the Children’s development at certain degree, the risks in children’s physical and mental health will make more parents have second thoughts about their children’s television viewing. |
