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热点作文21
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Online Romance. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1)随着互联网的普及，出现了很多网络恋情
2)人们对此褒贬不一
3)你的看法
【思路点拨】
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点要求指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求阐述人们对该现象所持的不同态度，提纲第3点要求表明“我”的看法，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。
根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：描述网络恋情的出现，引出人们对其的不同态度;对比阐述两种态度各自的理由;表明“我”更倾向于哪种态度并说明理由。
【参考范文】
Online Romance
With the widespread of the Internet, there have appeared many online romances. The lovers meet over the Internet, date on the net and finally fall in love with each other. People’s opinions on it vary greatly.
Some people think online love is very romantic and exciting. It is an amazing thing that the Internet brings together two strange persons far away from each other. Moreover, they think that online romance, compared with realistic love, attaches more emphasis on the appeal to each other in spirit and involves less material conditions. However, many others think differently. In their eyes, the Internet is a virtual world, on which there impossibly exist real, enduring love since it is very difficult to tell the real from the fake by the Internet. Besides, they argue that pursuing online romance is sometimes very dangerous because there are many cheaters on the net.
As far as I am concerned, it is an easy and fast way for people to make new people by the Internet. However, people should have more protection and safety consciousness when making friends by the Internet. Don’t give out rashly your personal information to strangers on the net. And keep it in your mind that you should have more realistic knowledge of each other before starting a romance.
热点作文22
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic How to Make the Best Use of College Life. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1)有的大学生在入学后寻找各种途径去赚钱
2)有的大学生为应付各种考试，经常参加各种辅导班
3)你打算如何有效地利用你的大学时光
【思路点拨】
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点和提纲第2点分别提出对待某问题的不同处理方式，提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”的处理方式，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。
根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：提出“如何有效利用大学时光”这一问题;阐述大学生主要将时间花在哪些方面和他们的主要考虑;谈谈“我”打算如何利用我的大学时光和“我”的主要理由。
【参考范文】
How to Make the Best Use of College Life
It is beyond doubt that we enjoy more free time in college than in middle school. But as to how to make use of our spare time, different students hold sharply different views.
In order to earn money, a good number of undergraduates are busy doing part-time jobs. In this way, they can relieve their families’ financial burden to some extent. Besides, they can achieve more independence through their work. Others are confronted by countless exams and they often attend guidance lectures in the hope of improving their performance in these tests. They believe that a record of good exam results will be useful when they look for jobs in the future.
As far as I am concerned, I will live my college life in a different way. On the one hand, as a student, I will give priority to the development of my knowledge and skills, so I am determined to spend most of my spare time studying hard. On the other hand, I think it is necessary for me to join one or more of the student associations. These associations can provide chances to improve my communicating skills and make my life colorful. In conclusion, I do believe that my college life will turn out to be colorful as well as fruitful.
热点作文23
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Young People Should Have Combatant Spirit. You should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline given below:
1)现在很多年轻人缺乏拼搏精神
2)导致这一问题的原因是什么
3)大学生应该加强拼搏精神
【思路点拨】
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点要求指出一个问题，指纲第2点要求分析导致该问题的原因，提纲第3点要求说明如何解决该问题，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。
根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：描述年轻人缺乏拼搏精神的现状;分析导致这一问题的原因;说明大学生应该如何加强拼搏精神。
【参考范文】
Young People Should Have Combatant Spirit
Nowadays, quite a few people believe that combatant spirit is essential for one’s success in today’s competitive world. However, some young people today think nothing of this spirit which，in their opinion, is only needed in revolutionary age. Even worse, when facing the difficulties, they will choose to yield or cower without making any efforts.
There are many factors resulting in young people’s lack of combatant spirit. Among these, comfortable living environment plays a vital role. Today’s parents provide nearly everything to the children, which results in the children’s lack of motivation for striving on their own. What’s more, the present education system does not pay much attention to help the young people build up the combatant spirit.
Considering the importance of combatant spirit, I think it is high time to take effective measures to strengthen young people’s combatant spirit. Above all, parents shouldn’t spoil their children and should ask their children to strive for what they intend to obtain. Moreover, schools should build a better environment for students to develop their struggle and aggressive spirit. Besides, young people themselves should adjust their minds and follow the examples of those people in history or around us who achieve their success under the stimulation of combatant spirit. In a word, it is an urgent thing for today’s young people to enhance combatant spirit.
